First of all, I would like to apologize to everyone, because in terms of the ending, the completion of this book is a bit hasty. It is estimated that some readers will not come back to their senses when they see the three words "complete".

There are many reasons for this situation. The first is the theme issue mentioned before. There are actually two ways to write chat streams. One is the Long Aotian style of the protagonist, relying on the protagonist's plot foresight to go to various worlds to show off the drama. The second part is a group portrait drama, which describes the scenes after each group member crosses over randomly.

Long Aotian's style of writing is relatively simple, but it's a bit samey. It may be a bit fresh at first, but after dozens or nearly a million words, it will gradually become boring. In fact, I have tried not to rely on this, such as the protagonist's battle. I have been exerting pressure, but in the end I still couldn't focus more on the protagonist, because really, group dramas are too difficult to write.

Especially when the number of people in the chat room increases, it will gradually become difficult to distinguish the priorities, and there is often a feeling that there is no way to write, and then it becomes a group drama sometimes, and Long Aotian sometimes.

The second is physical reasons. About two months ago, I had some physical problems. I have been taking medicine and going to the hospital. My updates are getting worse, my thoughts are gradually getting stuck, and I am getting more and more unsatisfied. Then my results It also slowly fell down, feeling like a vicious cycle, which was very uncomfortable.

Instead of writing so badly that no one cares about it, it is better to end it as soon as possible.

Although the ending is a bit rushed, everything that should be written is actually written. What was not written, such as Chaldea's human theory, what happened in the end, the protagonist's life experience, the origin of the chat room, and other seemingly foreshadowings , in fact, you can write a lot if you want to, but when you do write, you will feel that it is not necessary.

Just like whether the protagonist is an ordinary person or a descendant of the chat room civilization, it will not have any impact on the plot of the book. At most, it can be regarded as some dispensable easter eggs.

Of course, the most important thing is that I am exhausted and incapable of making some good things more interesting. Originally, I planned to wait until the Chinese server FGO released the Yu Ji card pool before finishing the book, and by the way, I would like to share the joy of the Five Treasure Yu Ji with you, but unfortunately, I really couldn’t wait until that time.

In general, this book has many shortcomings, and it has once again exposed some of the shortcomings in my writing. I hope it can be improved in the next book.

In fact, there are some improvements, such as the protagonist’s harem problem. This time I finally restrained myself and did not let myself go on this matter. In the end, only Yuki Sajo Aika and Asuna were confirmed to be in a relationship. Compared with the previous lavishness, I feel that I have made a lot of progress.

As for the future development of Kurumi, Yuzu, and the protagonists... Well, if I am interested, I may write a side story. Of course, it is not bad to just leave it blank, and it does not have to be perfect.

Finally, I would like to thank you all for your company over the past year. I am sorry that I cannot deliver an answer that satisfies everyone.

So, that’s basically it, let me take a break now.

Then, if we are destined, let's meet again in a month.

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